I think what you posted was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? suppose you typed a catchier title?

I mean, I don’t want to tell you how to run your website, but suppose you
added something to possibly grab a person’s attention?
I mean A 15 años de su estreno, así lucen las
estrellas de El Diario de un Princesa – Vocero Digital is a little vanilla.
You ought to look at Yahoo’s front page and watch how they create post
headlines to get people to open the links. You might try
adding a video or a related picture or two to get people interested
about everything’ve got to say. Just my opinion,
it might bring your website a little bit more interesting.